Sunday, February 21, 2010

Hindsight

In our abstractness,
our "good intentions",
our pretentions to save them pain,
we have dug ourselves
our graves.

3 comments:

  1. I like but I don't know if I agree ...

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  2. yeah... i don't agree either actually :) just something I wrote on my phone one night... then thought might as well keep it... in fact, am not even sure if i like it :)

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  3. |After life|

    (In our abstractness,
    our "good intentions",
    our pretensions to save them pain,
    we have dug ourselves
    our graves.)

    And even in our graves
    we are struggling
    to create comfort

    for "them" for "us".

    a second chance, anyone?

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